Introduction:
In my paper’s introduction, I had to clarify some of my sentences to make my claim a bit more clear overall. I did not change the opening sentences, as I felt it very clearly shows the reader where the paper starts and allows it to grow from there.
Evidence and Explanations:
Moving from rough to final draft, I added quite a bit more evidence into the paper. My rough draft focused more on introducing and developing these authors and making their major claims visible, but moving into the final draft I took more time to provide more analysis-type evidence that would support my thesis even more.
Reorganization:
I added even more concise information to existing paragraphs and added some new ones to help better analyze the conversation between the authors. There wasn’t as much moving around between the original and the final, as I used the original as a strong basis for the final by building off of it.
New Paragraphs:
In my opinion, my new paragraphs established after the rough draft were essential to the success of my paper. For the rough draft I did a good job at establishing the pieces by function of their authors. This was the beginning of the final paper, as it was able to introduce each author and what they brought to the rest of the paper with their claims. I added the new paragraphs following this introduction so that the reader had a basis as to what these authors were talking about.
